.echoes.

a million words flutter about my head like confused butterflies in a summery haze

1.28.2007

astorian arabesque

three am, blind from
rearview headlights, and your
fingers on my
knee. some mountain road
somewhere, we became low-set clouds
steaming in our curiosity and
breathing with the trees
screaming 'i am alive!
i am
so

alive!' commanding gaze,
frothy plams,
life spilling down our
arms; lover
with a thousand fingers
(hundreds of
hands) render silence
beneath mossy skin, evidence of
spring's still aging
remains (and whispers of
noctournal birth). your
voice, low velvet hum in the front of my
ears, reaching through canals-
lips to brainstem, the
dynamism of youthful euphoria.
presence is thick
this predawn,
wandersoaked tiremarks,
layers of reclining bare bodies
locked in
black asphalt embrace
along the motorway. we are
reaching;
growth fabricating
before our eyes_

3 Comments:

  • At January 29, 2007 10:59 AM, Blogger greg said…

    nice work, jen. i really like the way this poem flows.

     
  • At February 07, 2007 10:46 PM, Blogger Rudolf D. French said…

    whenever i miss you i pull this up on my screen and remind myself why. it's the good longing, i know this much is true because i feel it in my gut - my liver.

    i was concerned it would grow fainter in recognition. it has not.

     
  • At September 07, 2007 3:00 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    nondescriptive imagery...it makes me picture things that you don't need to describe. It makes me picture it like i lived it myself.

    -This is the one I liked! I'm happy i found it because I forgot its name.

     

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